I think the strong contrasts really sell the work so far. The distressed metal face in the upper right corner has that kill-my-soul appeal to it but the chromed-out version looks better as a portrait piece. Has a wonderful ferocity to it so far.
I love that font you used. Especially the e's for some reason. Very nicely done by offsetting them in red to accentuate the backwards e. Funny, of all the great things in these shots, that I'd like the font the best.
I like how his skull cybernetics is labled adidas, and the pose, it's shown off as if this new form of self-mutilation is fashionable. Quite the stud-muffin, I must say. What will he do when his upgrades are obsolete?